After looking at my other group members' ideas, I've come up with another idea that incorporates ideas from all three of the ones initially thought of.
- While titles play there are shots around a girl's room that is pink, filled with cuddly toys and generally quite girly and bright which would make an audience believe that the room belonged to a young girl.
- There is then a cut to a teenage girl who is 18 and in her second year of college as she wakes up while in bed.
- She reaches over to her bedside table to get her glasses, and as she picks them up there is a shot from her point of view which is blurry, and as she places the glasses on her face everything comes into focus.
- The girl then gets up and goes about doing some jobs in her room such as making the bed and arranging her teddies before sitting down to do some work, either something such as chemistry or maths which are typically considered 'nerdy' subjects to study, giving the audience the impression that the girl herself is a nerd.
- The girl then finishes off her work and logs onto her computer, her homepage being set to a revision website. She then opens a tab and goes onto facebook and receives a message on chat, from a girl at her college who is considered a 'popular' girl, inviting her to a party at her house that night. Thrilled, the girl accepts and then goes to get ready and try on outfits.
- While getting ready, there is a voiceover from the girl telling the audience about how her last year of college has been quite tough as she's generally felt like an outcast and hasn't really made any friends, so to be invited to a party and potentially be in with a popular group of people is an exciting thing for her.
- After jump cuts of the girl getting ready, we see a shot of the girl's feet as she puts some heels on and the camera slowly tilts up to reveal the girl looking glamorous and different in a party dress with her hair and make up done and without glasses.
- The girl then gets into her car and heads off to the party. While in the car, there's a scene of the girl getting overexcited and singing along to a song (maybe Cyndi Lauper's 'Girls just wanna have fun') in a way that will amuse the audience.
- When the girl arrives at the house, she knocks on the door and is greeted by the girl who invited her to the party. When she gets inside, she looks around and recognises a few faces but generally doesn't know anyone, so she sticks with the girl she does know while going to talk to other people.
- The girl gets offered an alcoholic drink by the girl hosting the party but she declines as she's driving home later, but after the girl persuades her to stay the night she starts to drink.
- Later in the night while the girl's with a group of both boys and girls, they start talking about doing drugs and the girl gets uncomfortable. After being pressured by the group, the girl leaves and goes up to the toilet, leaving a drink of hers on a table. There are then shots between the girl in the toilet looking at herself in the mirror, and between the girl's drink on the table and someone slipping a pill into it.
- As the girl gets back and finishes her drink, things seem to pick up quickly and the girl starts partying and dancing and doing shots with the group, before eventually passing and and being caught by a pair of arms.
- We then cut to some feet on a bed, and the camera slowly moves up from the feet and up the legs of a body whose tights are ripped and tattered, and we slowly see that it's the girl from earlier laid in bed on her own with her hair and make up ruined and her clothes in tatters.
- The girl looks around the room confused and looks at her clothes in disbelief. As she sits up in the bed there is a mirror at the end of it and she starts to cry gently as she sees her reflection.
- As she looks around the room, she notices her card keys on the bedside table. As she goes to collect them, she finds a note saying, "Gr8 time last night, but I'm sure you'll keep it to yourself, won't you? X" which contrasts with the state she's been left in to create a sick, vindictive atmosphere due to the deception in the question and the 'X' which has been left in a manipulative manner.
- As she girl realises the implications of the note, her eyes well up and she bolts out of the house and into her car before driving off in tears.
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